Thursday, January 5, 2012

Elijah has been doing a literacy assignment at school. One of the exercises is to choose a family photo and write a story about it. Erin did one with a photo of Grandma, Grandpa, Auntie Caroline, Uncle Devon, Charlotte, Mama and Papa in it. It was a pretty good story. But he liked it so much he wanted to do another, so I did one with him tonight, and I told him I would put it on all the computers (the internet) so everyone can see it. This is the result:

Once upon a time, everybody came over and we out to the creek. While we were at the creek, we went to the trail and watched the water. It was cold and wet. We ran around and looked for fish, and then we saw a doggie. Doggies are fun to play with. Somebody was with the dog. We saw trees and Grandma and Grandpa were there. Auntie Caroline and Uncle Devon were there. We had a fun time.

We climbed up the stairs until we got to the houses. Then we followed the sidewalk. Grandma and I were sitting on plants! We were funny. Grandma and I were running. And then I started walking fast until we got home.

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